Half writing day - revising Anticipating the societal transformation required to solve the environmental crisis in the 21st century

Today I have had half a writing day devoted to starting on revising my article "Anticipating the societal transformation required to solve the environmental crisis in the 21st century: Umwelt trajectories revisited" - first of all by getting an overview of requested and suggested changes (major revisions are required). Total number of writing days is up to 32,5.