Article on formal/informal predator management turned down

My invited article "Formell og uformell rovviltforvaltning i Skandinavia, med særlig hensyn til norsk ulveforvaltning" [Formal and informal carnivore management in Scandinavia, with emphasis on Norwegian wolf management] has been turned down in its current version by the Norwegian academic journal Materialisten. They think the text is not available enough, and welcome a revised version. I will now have to figure out whether I want to revise it according to their wishes, or rather submit it elsewhere.